what do you think?

[DJ_MikeyRevile]

be honest, i wrote this a few months ago

what do you think

The morning sun burns up the sky
Its spring agian and time for new life
Warming the air for time to grow who knows this kid might have somthing to show

The rain from the spring will soon have no effect for the sun will have burned with no respect
In the summer youll learn that one day you will age
But the kid whos begun begins his first page

in the fall weak will die and soon you and i
But why worry for now when lifes on his side
Fall sends message of death and renewal agian this kid is begining but one day he'll end

When winter comes the sun will run
Leaving cold in the air with no sensations
But at least the kid knows what he's finnaly done
The first page is writtin and a new years begun

[Nemesis]

now i know how the Jews felt.

[DJ_MikeyRevile]

hahahahahaha thats a hard feeling to find hahaha

[XX0wnsXY]

reminds me of owl city.

[DJ_MikeyRevile]

right? yea... i fucking HATE owl city so unbelivably much
youll never understand even if i explained

Edit: it explains a bit ABOUT ..owl city..

[XX0wnsXY]

Lol, i meant abstract like he is...but i do quite like owl city..not all, but a lot.

[Rapedollar$]

owl city is awesome. if you cant fathom this you need to expand your horizons.

i cant stand people who prescribe themselves to a few particular brands of music. all music has its moments, if you cant see how they all work in, in the grand scheme, i feel sorry for you.

[XX0wnsXY]

owl city is awesome. if you cant fathom this you need to expand your horizons.

i cant stand people who prescribe themselves to a few particular brands of music. all music has its moments, if you cant see how they all work in, in the grand scheme, i feel sorry for you.

I agree to some extent. some music i find totally useless, but that is just a matter of personal taste i guess. i like owl city because the music/lyrics are so abstract that it makes me feel like im truly listening to a dream. my fav has to be tip of the iceberg...something about it just feels awesome.

[Rapedollar$]

it does have a strange abstract-ness to it. i dont listen to alot of their music but im horridly addicted to fireflys. the only downside of which is that it makes me think of my ex. but it is a good song either way.

[DJ_MikeyRevile]

i agreee with you, my hatred extends his "style" of music, my stle of music is the same....
thats why.. when he lived 10 min away from me we "collabed" and i helped him make a song

now he is dead...
with copywrited music that i can no longer claim... as mine

his music is amazing as an artist, but .. well yay nvm
i dontwanna talk about it

ANYWAYS.

yay what do you think of it, i wanna use it as my single on my album but i need opinions first

( it will be a song.. but i am trying to find a single ya know?)

[XX0wnsXY]

i agreee with you, my hatred extends his "style" of music, my stle of music is the same....
thats why.. when he lived 10 min away from me we "collabed" and i helped him make a song

now he is dead...
with copywrited music that i can no longer claim... as mine

his music is amazing as an artist, but .. well yay nvm
i dontwanna talk about it

ANYWAYS.

yay what do you think of it, i wanna use it as my single on my album but i need opinions first

( it will be a song.. but i am trying to find a single ya know?)

dot dot dot.

Anyway, I like it.

[DJ_MikeyRevile]

i like it to, but fire flys was a project i helped him with, all his other music is great but he fucked me off

i was goig for an abstract lyric
letting the reader and listner to translate the lyric into what they wanted to comprehend to best suite them self, a lyric capable of SEVREL meanings based off the reader/ listner

ya know?

[Nemesis]

copywrites expire, you have to renew them all the time, if he's dead just wait for it to expire and get your stuff back.