English classes anyone??

[The.Beast.13.]

Hey guys!!

I am in a great moment of inspiration in the last few days, i wrote a lot (lyrics)!!! I am wondering if someone would be my english corrector!! lol...not especially for grammar ( cuz i can kick my ass and find it in the dictionnary)but more for expressions, idioms, metapohr, etc....because i know, sometimes, i take my french expression and translate em to the english but it doesn t always sounds like i want or mean what i want.... well...anyway...i would love some opinion on how i wrote em and what you think about what i say in those.... I can send em to you and you can just go over em and tell me what is correct and cool and what is not!!

Thanks

Peace

[-=NYS=- C.O.]

Dual's the man you're looking for. He's an English Major from Stanford University.

[Spaztech]

*cough* *cough*

[ManBearPig <ibis>]

Dual's the man you're looking for. He's an English Major from Stanford University.

*Cough* He means Stanford trucking company *Cough*

[Hitman]

*Cough* He means Stanford trucking company *Cough*

I LOL'ed irl.

[ZERO]

I could take a look at them in my spare time, by the way i do not think i got a chance to say that the new page looks nice.

where are they...

[uncle june]

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