Hey guys!!

I am in a great moment of inspiration in the last few days, i wrote a lot (lyrics)!!! I am wondering if someone would be my english corrector!! lol...not especially for grammar ( cuz i can kick my ass and find it in the dictionnary)but more for expressions, idioms, metapohr, etc....because i know, sometimes, i take my french expression and translate em to the english but it doesn t always sounds like i want or mean what i want.... well...anyway...i would love some opinion on how i wrote em and what you think about what i say in those.... I can send em to you and you can just go over em and tell me what is correct and cool and what is not!!

Thanks

Peace