I made a rap listen it is good i was even suprised!

[brentidge]

you dont have to down load it there is just a play button if your scared i am trying to virues up your pc rofl!


http://www.4shared.com/file/22717934...s_succers.html

[A Baby Panda]

I think you may have overdone the voice effects because I can't really understand. The beat is pretty good though and I enjoy the piano element.

EDIT: Also I like the bells and electronic elements though I think it breaks for too long and gets a teenie bit repetitive

[brentidge]

lol very nice critical critisizim i like that it was my first thing making on this progam i just down loaded i am not a rap kinda guy but when i listen to rap i listen to like dj screw and that slow thugish sound the lyrics are lame so they cover it up lol thacks for listennign

[-=NYS=- C.O.]

Horrible.

[Decoy]

Horrible.

[maynard]

you dont have to down load it there is just a play button if your scared i am trying to virues up your pc rofl!


http://www.4shared.com/file/22717934...s_succers.html

repeating the same couple sentences over and over and over doesn't make it a rap... generally rappers have what's called vocabulary. also the voice effect sounds absolutely retarded.

also 7 mins is wwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy 2 long.

[Scrubbleboo]

[Curdy]

well after what happned to Scrubbleboo im gonna pass on this

i guess screaming and melting is not my thing 0.o

[brentidge]

fuck yo all this is the best song in the world

[Scrubbleboo]

fuck yo all this is the best song in the world