Halp me make a limerick or possibly a sonnet

[DJ_MikeyRevile]

he begged and he begged for help
his mind feeling like a drought
he sat and whined
he could not rhyme
a limerick you must do your self

[Christmas]

he begged and he begged for help
his mind feeling like a drought
he sat and whined
he could not rhyme
a limerick you must do your self

That was pretty bad.

[BladeTwinSwords]

A limerick follows an AABBA format. LEARN MORE POETRY!

Also do your own damn homework.

[acolyte_to_jippity]

There once was a bum named cheff
he asked for verse from the best
they laughed him away
and ruined his day
and cheered at his eventual death


bitch

A limerick follows an AABBA format. LEARN MORE POETRY!

Also do your own damn homework.

sooo...i'm good right? u mean, cheff to death is a slant rhyme, but an extremely close one so it's all good eh?

[DJ_MikeyRevile]

slant rhymes dont always work for somepeople who read it, but cheff and death do work

[mastercheff]

Well i got it

There once was a man who loved food
He was always in a fruity mood
He ate everynight
Eating everything in sight
He ate until he no longer looked like a dude.

[acolyte_to_jippity]

...

meh. you use ate/eat too much. it doesn't flow correctly.

[Nemesis]

plus it sucks, you'll probably fail.

[acolyte_to_jippity]

i still like mine better

[mastercheff]

plus it sucks, you'll probably fail.

I want to see you do this yourself.

And acolyte I liked it as well.