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    Default what do you think?

    be honest, i wrote this a few months ago

    what do you think

    The morning sun burns up the sky
    Its spring agian and time for new life
    Warming the air for time to grow who knows this kid might have somthing to show

    The rain from the spring will soon have no effect for the sun will have burned with no respect
    In the summer youll learn that one day you will age
    But the kid whos begun begins his first page

    in the fall weak will die and soon you and i
    But why worry for now when lifes on his side
    Fall sends message of death and renewal agian this kid is begining but one day he'll end

    When winter comes the sun will run
    Leaving cold in the air with no sensations
    But at least the kid knows what he's finnaly done
    The first page is writtin and a new years begun

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    now i know how the Jews felt.

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    hahahahahaha thats a hard feeling to find hahaha

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    reminds me of owl city.

    If you were a beautiful sound in the echos all around, I'd be your harmony.

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    right? yea... i fucking HATE owl city so unbelivably much
    youll never understand even if i explained

    Edit: it explains a bit ABOUT ..owl city..

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    Lol, i meant abstract like he is...but i do quite like owl city..not all, but a lot.

    If you were a beautiful sound in the echos all around, I'd be your harmony.

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    owl city is awesome. if you cant fathom this you need to expand your horizons.

    i cant stand people who prescribe themselves to a few particular brands of music. all music has its moments, if you cant see how they all work in, in the grand scheme, i feel sorry for you.




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    Quote Originally Posted by Rapedollar$ View Post
    owl city is awesome. if you cant fathom this you need to expand your horizons.

    i cant stand people who prescribe themselves to a few particular brands of music. all music has its moments, if you cant see how they all work in, in the grand scheme, i feel sorry for you.
    I agree to some extent. some music i find totally useless, but that is just a matter of personal taste i guess. i like owl city because the music/lyrics are so abstract that it makes me feel like im truly listening to a dream. my fav has to be tip of the iceberg...something about it just feels awesome.

    If you were a beautiful sound in the echos all around, I'd be your harmony.

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    it does have a strange abstract-ness to it. i dont listen to alot of their music but im horridly addicted to fireflys. the only downside of which is that it makes me think of my ex. but it is a good song either way.




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    i agreee with you, my hatred extends his "style" of music, my stle of music is the same....
    thats why.. when he lived 10 min away from me we "collabed" and i helped him make a song

    now he is dead...
    with copywrited music that i can no longer claim... as mine

    his music is amazing as an artist, but .. well yay nvm
    i dontwanna talk about it

    ANYWAYS.

    yay what do you think of it, i wanna use it as my single on my album but i need opinions first

    ( it will be a song.. but i am trying to find a single ya know?)

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