Personally I do not like commenting on development music unless I can get a lossless RAW to ensure that I am hearing exactly what is intended.

I think the doubled intro needs to be cut in half. The 33sec mark should be the end of that section. Then a new 33sec section needs to be added to the end to bring more conclusion to the work. I do not feel that this work has any end, the music just stops playing. I hear an intro and a development but no conclusion.

So please try to create a great conclusion to this work so we can give it another listen. (Also link us a raw).


On another note I just want to point out for reference that this quote is invalid: "it almost kills the song. Lovee the song". The word song can not be used as this is not a song, a song being a piece of homophonic music containing vocals with accompaniment. Also you could remember it the easy way of it is not a song if there is no singing although this can be misleading as it is possible to have a piece of music that contains vocals ie singing but is not a song in that it may be for example monophonic or polyphonic thus not meeting the definition of a song.